My new Machinima series "Runescape Hidden Camera"

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nB6ZB_YfUyU

This is the intro. critique it and tell me what you think.

Except you Pantha... lol jk i like your opinion the most. Cuz its the truth...

Did you actually make that or did someone else and you just found it?
Because personally I though that was very good

i made it all up to the part where the Runescape falls down. I stoll that from an actual Jagex vid. But i added the Hidden Camera.

Update: i am done with adding the video for now. Just got to add Words above heads and then add voices.
and figure out how im going to end.

o.o Looks nice, shame the knight guy is facing the wall with the clip you have of it though..
If you can get that shot again however him actually doing something?

Also what's all that shizz in the description?

It's Just things that people search for in RS videos so i put them in to get views ^^

Oh, that makes sense

But anyways. Just made a Twitter. So check it out... http://twitter.com/Mordorkyle

Offtopic much..

Ima making one (I had one but seem unable to locate it )

Its exciting to watch that intro, it does draw me in, nice music choice and clips, but the text is sooooo bland it removes that "omg this is awesome lets watch it" to "Probably poorly made".

Need some help with the text?

versochi wrote:Its exciting to watch that intro, it does draw me in, nice music choice and clips, but the text is sooooo bland it removes that "omg this is awesome lets watch it" to "Probably poorly made".

Need some help with the text?

I like this feedback -- can actually work with it, and its constructive - if only more people could give feedback like this

Erm ok Thanks Pantha... i work on that any suggestions on Colours? or Something.

You may want to try and bittorrent some exciting sound elements.

Check http://www.videocopilot.net/products/dsfx/


that can give an even better effect on the text.

here is bit torrent link for that package

http://isohunt.com/torrent_details/141350485/designer+sound+fx?tab=summary

Just download .torrent and only select the designer fx one.

NO PROBLEM

Edit: You may also need some music that fits the show, it will need a comedy tune to it and make it sound like your pulling pranks.

The music for the intro is good, but that kind is not good during your actual hidden camera clips.

Alright thanks ill look into that stuff.

Kyle wrote:i made it all up to the part where the Runescape falls down. I stoll that from an actual Jagex vid. But i added the Hidden Camera.

Update: i am done with adding the video for now. Just got to add Words above heads and then add voices.
and figure out how im going to end.

dude can you tell me how to add words above heads with sony vegas 8 ??

megawoopi wrote:

Kyle wrote:i made it all up to the part where the Runescape falls down. I stoll that from an actual Jagex vid. But i added the Hidden Camera.

Update: i am done with adding the video for now. Just got to add Words above heads and then add voices.
and figure out how im going to end.

dude can you tell me how to add words above heads with sony vegas 8 ??

a long and annoying method of following the heads and keeping the text on top of it throughout the clip.

Boring shit

and dont run vegas 8 i have Sony Vegas Pro 9 so.... i dont know if its different. But ill show some pics of the settings for adding the text.




Put the Bottom bar all the way to the left and keep the other two all the way to the right and that will give Pure Yellow.



Now check the box that says "Draw Outline" Then change the color to perfect black. Then keep settings at what they show bellow. And then just go to the Placement tab and move it over the players head.

thanks dude

yeah no prob. if you need any other Vegas tutorials ask lol